Hard Not to Notice Those Eyes

by Wishinguponyou   Aug 20, 2008


It's hard not to notice those eyes
that shoot me by surprise
River dark and very deep
It's a mystery I'll always keep

It flows a shiver down my throat.
and sends goose bumps down my spine
and it heats me up like a coat
making my own eyes shine

Looking deep into is all
I see waves swirling at me
as I hear nature call
knowing there's something a naked eye
can't see.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Amber

    Hmm well I have loked at all of your poems and this is byf far the best I think this is way more of Poem then the rest. Its more descriptive.

    Way better than the others

    Good JOb on this one :]

    You can P.M anytime you want if you have any questions bout what I mean or want help or anything :]