Forever And Always

by The Queen   Aug 20, 2008


Forever and Always

When forever is no longer whispered-
And always seems a repeated mistake,
My love for you will help me go through
Just like the promise, I shall not break.

No great wall can withstand this love
For, I am elevated to your chaste heart.
I fought against the youthful heart,
To be with you today and tomorrow.

Let my love bring you to a new hope,
Where no agony and only love exists-
And even if you have a change of mind
Do not worry, for I have a patient heart.

The beauty of love, speaks of me and you
For, we live inside each other everlastingly.
Let this true love engulf our greatest fears,
That we may live forever with eternal love.

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  • 15 years ago

    by lonelyrider

    A nice poem girl...
    you have a nice hand to wrote a poem,
    i noticed you have a lot of poem there do you have a inspiration???

    >>by the way congrats...

  • 15 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    What more can be said of love, what more can be written that will show the true meaning of love - I think you have done it with this one. I liked almost every line and found it a story as I worked my way through your prose. very well written, not too complicated and not too long. A perfect mix of simple and complex thoughts - easy on the eye and kind to the heart. Bravo...

  • 16 years ago

    by dora

    Great poem. i really liked it very well worded. keep it up =) 5/5 xo.

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Wow fantastic poem

    such a big heart you have when you said:
    "Let my love bring you to a new hope
    Where no agony and only love exists
    And even if you have a change of mind
    Do not worry for I have a patient heart "

    the stanza here was very powerful and lovley:
    "The beauty of love, speaks of me and you
    For we live inside each other everlastingly
    Let this true love engulf our greatest fears
    That we may live forever with eternal love "

    strong words mixed with the confident of love
    excellent job

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is an amazing love poem after my own heart The wording is excellent and I lke your style