Burned

by Elsie   Aug 20, 2008


Jimmy was a little orphan boy
In the basement he found a toy
All the children together played
until in the ground they layed

Jimmy, the pour orphan kid
make a fire yes he did
The orphanage burned to the ground
All the bodies have been found

In the basement he found a lighter
He saw that it makes things brighter
"Don't play with fire" the policeman said
"Ore you too could be dead"

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marie

    I liked the story, and i liked the format/rhyme scheme, but i didn't like how they worked together... the story was dark, but the rhyme scheme and wording made it seem like a children's book.

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