Wow this is one good piece work i love it. 5/5

Wow this is one good piece work i love it. 5/5

Nice work.. I loved it. R

And I thank you, for reading mine, as well.. :]

"Like a broken flower in the cold
In harsh wind
I will hang on so tightly
Hanging on by my limbs"

I love this stanza. A very good metaphor here.

This is a simple yet very effective and sad piece.
Good work..
5/5

and yes, i’m kay’s friend.
xD