Comments : The Girl You See Is Not Yourself

  • 16 years ago

    by Ixora

    What a wonderful poem hun. I really liked this line:
    "No one cares because they all look past the heart"

    It's so true and I think if people looked inside more often they'd be able to see the truth and apprciate people, and maybe, just maybe, the world wouldn't be so cold. You did a great portrayl of btoh sides of the argument here. 5/5

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