Me

by smiley   Aug 20, 2008


Behind this mask is my true face
behinde this skin is my real self
behind this heart is nothing
Behind these lie are the true
You look at me see smile but not knowing that smile is lie
behind my happiness is my true self figure this out and you know the true me
Or am just confuzed there reason for my life but just don't wat till I figure out I just be confuzed

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    A very short piece but full of inspiring thoughts,, actually behind that poem its just also like me... coz i've behind of that story most of the time.... i like this very touching 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "behinde this skin is my real self"
    `behind not behinde...

    "Behind these lie are the true"
    `I'd reword it..
    Behind these lies, is the truth.

    "You look at me see smile but not knowing that smile is lie"
    `Woah. Confusing wording. Maybe a comma or something would help me understand where your thoughts seperate?

    Confused not confuzed

    Umm, its a short thought that could be expanded so much. You only told like 2 things about yourself in this poem, and I think that there's so much more that you could say. Needs improvement. 4/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by mandy

    Very touching, I sure many could relate. I love the heart and message you put into this poem, 5/5.

    -mandy :)

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