This even made me smile..haha. this was great, senor tomato. seriouslyyyyy. *i'm whining cuz i know you won't listen to me. -.-*

I'm writing you a poem
Cause it's how you make me feel
The stars are not a metaphor
I am right
And they are real

^^ I adore this. The flow fit with the rest of the poem, which i didn't think it would at first because the lines are different....and the meaning's great..

5/5

Ok, your officialy the best poet of love poetry
you just write so well
and know the right words to touch the reader