Last tear [Collab]

by Amber   Aug 20, 2008


Walking hand in hand smiling,
As the stars scatter the night skies.
Everything was perfect,
Yet sadness lingered in ones eyes.

The smile started to disappear from my face.
I saw concern when I looked at you, but what from?
I was becoming scared, as my body trembled.
Soon I felt my emotions and body go numb.

I turned to face you,
Stopped you in your tracks.
"I don't think we'll work anymore...
There's something we both lack."

"W-Why not hun? Please.. Please..
Tell me this is a cruel heartless joke."
Tears start streaming down my face,
Throat tightens. I get a feeling like I will choke.

"This is hard for me too
But we must find happiness on our own.
We can't depend on others for it,
This is something we have to do alone."

"What the hell do you mean on our own?
Others are what bring the happiness to you.
I can't do it on my own, and you can't either.
I will cry forever because I know this love wasn't true."

"You must find happiness on your own,
You can't always depend on me."
"Then I guess I am screwed because I need you."
Now I walk alway crying my last tear for you to see.

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The odd numbered stanzas were completed by HvN.
The even numbered stanzas were completed by me.
The last stanza was a combined effort. Hvn did the first 2 lines and I did the last two lines.

Please as a favor to us both if you comment on mine please do the same and comment on hers

Here is Hvn's link please look for our poem:

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=278726

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  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Really liked the format and style of this poem, i could really feel your voice and as though you were talking in poetic style nice one

  • 16 years ago

    by SoUrNameIsTia

    Very cool =] you guys made it flow nicley!

    5/5

    ~tia