Comments : Lost

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Awesome dark poem...I really enjoyed reading it a lot..
    And my favorite part is

    No place of comfort nor warmth or strength
    Nothing to hold onto, slipping, sliding, falling fast
    Enormous is the void, which blankets the light
    Time for solitude, no spoken word to be found;

    A mind gone blank, ask me, where is hope?

    U used the words that show depression,being lost and sadness...
    It was a great choice..
    Good job,keep it up:)..

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert Daniel Long

    You really dove into the realms of thought and that of the turmoil of thought and what brings chaos to mind....awsome!!!!!!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    When we lose hope it is hard to see the light at the end of the tunnel so to speak. I honestly believe in releasing the feelings in poetry and again you have done it. You have released that emotion that I have begun to admire in your poetry. Great write. and I will keep reading.

    Take Care,
    Kay