Wow....a real deep poem you have here...i like it tho...it tells a story ppl should take a look at and try to help themselves and even other..i like..5/5...

could you look at some of mine and comment..thx..lol

Cherry!
I like the way you can bring a thought so alive with just one line!sweet

Cherry!
I like the way you can bring a thought so alive with just one line!sweet