by Heath Aug 20, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
A leap into the forgetful past |
by wolfschild
Thought it was very good, beat was kinda off but so is mine some things really do have to be done alone well done |
I can relate to your situation. Sometimes there are only things that can be done that can only be done alone. your transition was a little off but i really liked the emotion in your poem . maybe u can read one of mine. |