Comments : Alone I need be, please don't feel I do not love you

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    I can relate to your situation. Sometimes there are only things that can be done that can only be done alone. your transition was a little off but i really liked the emotion in your poem . maybe u can read one of mine.

  • 16 years ago

    by wolfschild

    Thought it was very good, beat was kinda off but so is mine some things really do have to be done alone well done