Comments : Then, now, and future

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Sweet poem. I think it's neat to look back at the past, but not to dwell on it. Just to look at the positives and everything. Then looking at the present and how things are and how the future may be. It's always interesting to look at. I loved how this poem did just that. You explained the past, present and the future involving someone who you apperently care so much about. Well done. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I liked it short and sweet.I like how you can make anything sound so good

  • 16 years ago

    by dora

    Aww that was soo cute!! very loving and sweet. i love the way it was structured. great job, 5/5.