This poem is asome i loved it you are really good 5/5

This was a great write. very pure and deep. i could feel the emotions throughout the whole thing.

Dont say Im wrong.
For I know her better.
Shes nothing more,
Then a dying feather

i loved that stanza. especially the part about the dying feather, very creative writing. all and all this was a great piece of work. keep writing! job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

Like OMG i need some tutoring with writing poems... can u help