You Promised..

by LostLove329   Aug 20, 2008


The last thing on earth i thought i would do..

No way in hell did i think we would lose..

You promised me forever, Damn you gave me your word, but i see now you think your word was unheard

Is it that you think that I'm stupid, or you love making me cry, Because all you ever do is feed me all these lies

Thought you were the only one who cared and once again I'm totally wrong..

Because i found out the worst you played me all along..

Can you Imagen how it feels to have your heart ripped out..

Then stepped on and put back and not know what it's about..

Not knowing why your hurting and going through all the shame, for some who's cruel enough to put you through this pain

I don't know what i did to deserve it but i can't take anymore..

I thought you had the key to my heart, i guess you tried to open the wrong door..

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    I think it's a wonderful idea and worded really well , but it doesn't really flow . Try using full words , like because instead of cuz , because i think it just makes it look and sound more sincere .

  • 16 years ago

    by Jaimee

    Awh, that was so sad!!
    Good job though.

    5/5 =]