by Jaimee
This was written very well. |
I feel like I want to see D; |
"My staring at this simple site." |
by ether
I really like this. A lot. |
Omg! austin! this is amazing. great great job!! |
by Hollymariee
I really like it.. The flow is flawless and I just really like the idea of the poem , it's definately nothing i could ever think of. |
Nice flooooow =] |
It was a nice poem^^, but your rhymining seemed forced along with the words at the end of each line. It also threw off your transition to me. and the begining you have an aabb format than you switch it up which threw me off. I mean no offense to you. i really did like it^^ and its obvious other people like this poem too |
As always your meter is very easy for be to put up this poem is so ambiguos it could reflect darkness to light warm romance to cold reality depending on mood |
by Bugg
This was so pretty and it flowed very well, in my opinion. I never would have thought to write a poem about colors. :) |
by katie
Realy cool poem i loved it ::)) |
by x Mo x
Wow, that was excellent. |
This kept me reading all the way through...this was wonderful. my take is the colors are friends? or very happy memories. 5/5 |
by Weeping Wolf
Oooo....very beautiful imagery...i love the color theme, it made me imagine you sitting on a bench watching the leaves fall in all their different colors. my favorite line is the last. great job. |
by Mishka
Brilliant hehe like brilliant snow |
by Sweet lig
Wow that was very outstanding piece of poetry, great expressions! all the words was very well express and very impressive,, u had written very well and i really enjoyed this lines... |
I love the end and how snow and darkness mix, very nice, the flow was great to. nice write |
Loveloveloveit!!! 5/5 |
I like how you opened by saying thank you to the colours that inspired this poem. |
Wow!! |