Comments : Colors Fall Like Snow

  • 16 years ago

    by Jaimee

    This was written very well.
    Don't change anything =]
    Great job, I like your style.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lesslovedthanloathed

    I feel like I want to see D;
    Colors are wonderful~
    I like how there's a wondeful love for colors flowing from your peom.

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "My staring at this simple site."
    `I think you meant me instead of my.

    This poem was really interesting. I loved the inspiration that you got to write this poem, it was really unique and I loved how you expanded on it too. Last line was my favorite, I loved the title and how you used it in a way at the end was outstanding. 5/5. (:

  • 16 years ago

    by ether

    I really like this. A lot.
    It's unique and very well written with great flow.

    Only one thing I would change. I can't imagine colours ignoring people, I can imagine them watching people. The ignoring people thing seems a a little cliche.
    But nevertheless, this is a great poem.

    5/5

    jess ~

  • 16 years ago

    by Savannah Kate

    Omg! austin! this is amazing. great great job!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    I really like it.. The flow is flawless and I just really like the idea of the poem , it's definately nothing i could ever think of.

  • 16 years ago

    by StillxBreathing

    Nice flooooow =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    It was a nice poem^^, but your rhymining seemed forced along with the words at the end of each line. It also threw off your transition to me. and the begining you have an aabb format than you switch it up which threw me off. I mean no offense to you. i really did like it^^ and its obvious other people like this poem too

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    As always your meter is very easy for be to put up this poem is so ambiguos it could reflect darkness to light warm romance to cold reality depending on mood
    well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Bugg

    This was so pretty and it flowed very well, in my opinion. I never would have thought to write a poem about colors. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by katie

    Realy cool poem i loved it ::))

  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Wow, that was excellent.

    I love how descriptive it was and yet it was still open to personal imagery. Most poets can't write poems like that. I loved it though, every line of it was amazing. Great work!

    -mo-

  • 16 years ago

    by SilentSuicide

    This kept me reading all the way through...this was wonderful. my take is the colors are friends? or very happy memories. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Oooo....very beautiful imagery...i love the color theme, it made me imagine you sitting on a bench watching the leaves fall in all their different colors. my favorite line is the last. great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mishka

    Brilliant hehe like brilliant snow

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Wow that was very outstanding piece of poetry, great expressions! all the words was very well express and very impressive,, u had written very well and i really enjoyed this lines...

    If they leave or disappear
    The shadows will begin to flow.
    But still they fall around me here.
    The colors fall like brilliant snow.

    this really marvelpus part of me,, great job 5/5 keep on writing

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    I love the end and how snow and darkness mix, very nice, the flow was great to. nice write

  • 16 years ago

    by stillmomsgirl

    Loveloveloveit!!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by vintage darling

    I like how you opened by saying thank you to the colours that inspired this poem.

    i thought your comparisons were really good.

    favourite line:
    "The colors fall like brilliant snow. "

    it was so beautiful.

    i loved this poem.

  • Wow!!
    you completly painted the beautiful image in my mind!
    The rhyming was wonderful and your diction was beyond description!

    Now because of this poem when ever i'm out i'm going to be paying attention to the vivid colors of life

    **Ada**
    *aBSwaBHiaPL*