by Spoken Silence Aug 21, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
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Oh wow. Beautiful. Umm, the only thing that was awkward like one of your poems I've read was the puncuation, one side you don't have any commas, but then on the other side you do (if that makes any sense to you). The content of the poem though was beautiful. This style in my opinion really helps make the poem flow well. Great work. 5/5. |
by Mister 47
Wow i am impresedd very impressed great and the explanation of this on the beguining jsut great |