A Hearts Song (Double Etheree)

by Spoken Silence   Aug 21, 2008


**A Double Etheree would consist of a syllable count which goes as follows:
Double Etheree: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 10, 9, 8, 7, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1 **

What
If I
Could sing you
A beautiful
Song of many words
Would you accept my heart?
And keep it in your soft hands?
Away from all who dare take.
Would you hold it in your possession?
Forever my heart will be yours to keep.
None can take care of it as you would do.
I trust no one but you with my heart.
So precious and worthy you are.
My song could only sing to-
A heart as good as yours,
I love you forever,
And this is my,
Song to you.
My very,
Love.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Oh wow. Beautiful. Umm, the only thing that was awkward like one of your poems I've read was the puncuation, one side you don't have any commas, but then on the other side you do (if that makes any sense to you). The content of the poem though was beautiful. This style in my opinion really helps make the poem flow well. Great work. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Wow i am impresedd very impressed great and the explanation of this on the beguining jsut great

    you deserve my vote