Wow i am impresedd very impressed great and the explanation of this on the beguining jsut great

you deserve my vote

Oh wow. Beautiful. Umm, the only thing that was awkward like one of your poems I've read was the puncuation, one side you don't have any commas, but then on the other side you do (if that makes any sense to you). The content of the poem though was beautiful. This style in my opinion really helps make the poem flow well. Great work. 5/5.