The concept of the poem is very good. It seems the poem came straight from your heart. You've expressed a lot of emotions. Genuine feelings are there. But the structure of the poem could have been better. Overall it's good.

Your poem was perfect in so many ways... the meaning was full of sadness and intense emotion. I also look to the mirror seeking my true character yet only find my reflection, though we never see whats behind the mask. You have captured the true feeling of wanting to find whats behind the mask so we can present it to the world....great job this is very inspiring. 5/5