Blood

by Veamm   Aug 21, 2008


Blood

Blood is thicker than water
Washed hands to satisfy
To blend with nature
Kiss me, this blood to purify

Leaves fall from a bush
Burn and fade away
Roots embedded within my skin
Soar in the sky, just to try

With this love, scent of love
Taste blood, my organs
My ideas mix with datas
Let me feel your hands

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  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Well-written, I like the imagery and the word of choice. Keep writing on:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    I see there's a struggle with the rhymes. But other than that, it's quite a nice read.
    Your hands are filled with blood, probably a metaphor for life, and you want to hold another person's hand to feel life. I like the concept here. 5/5 from me :)

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