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by Xanthe
I see there's a struggle with the rhymes. But other than that, it's quite a nice read. Your hands are filled with blood, probably a metaphor for life, and you want to hold another person's hand to feel life. I like the concept here. 5/5 from me :) -X
by Yrem Crish
Well-written, I like the imagery and the word of choice. Keep writing on:)