Comments : Blood

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    I see there's a struggle with the rhymes. But other than that, it's quite a nice read.
    Your hands are filled with blood, probably a metaphor for life, and you want to hold another person's hand to feel life. I like the concept here. 5/5 from me :)

    -X

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Well-written, I like the imagery and the word of choice. Keep writing on:)