by Veamm Aug 21, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Rachel Rendon |
by Yrem Crish
Splendid. The acrostic wrote in meaningful poem even it was hard to do but you still managed it... |
by Xanthe
Great job with this. An acrostic is quite hard to do while managing to make the whole poem have meaning. I love the imagery in the beginning lines, as the reader comes to the middle, it becomes more personal, and you let the reader get a glimpse of your life. The ending lines were my favorite. Great write. 5/5 :) Keep writing! |
by Lofallenve
Wow. This poem is stunning, I'm at a loss of words to describe the beauty of it. Wonderfully written. 5/5 |