Comments : Yellow roses

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    You know i was going to give you a big lecture about this but since i ran through the same (almost the same) exprience so i understand.

    it's much better to leave him now rather than keep it fake. whatever your reasons are but i think this for the best.

    as for the poem, i enjoyed it, i enjoyed it alot.
    i can imagine the scenes and the feelings behind this poem.

    i was emotionally motivated by this part
    "Now i am so sad,and feel so guilty near you
    It is hard to say-i used you
    To forget some memories from the past
    Its tearing to say-our love wont last "

    but my best part which i can relate to it 100% is this one
    "So now please forgive one last time
    Since what I did can be called crime
    Sorry,please,I am a heartless thief
    Since i stole your heart and let you believe"
    "

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Forgot to tell you one thing ==> excellent poem

    ...i really missed your poems but since you write them when you are not feeling good
    then i guess its ok :)

  • 16 years ago

    by SilentSuicide

    This was a great piece. loved how it flowed<3

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    The nights we spent at the edge of your bed
    Now those memories makes me,oh,so sad
    We were laughing,talking without knowing
    our love deadline is coming

    this was my favorite stanza. i really liked how you also use yellow roses, nice work.