Comments : Pretend

  • 16 years ago

    by Song Bird

    I love that poem its beautiful. i feel ya. kudos

  • 16 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    This was beautifully written and I loved every word of it.. it's very expressive and outstanding. 5/5

    Take care! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by LostLove329

    Omg i loved it .. and i really love dat qoute you wrote:

    "I love him even though I know he'll break my heart. But I hate him because he'll break it to be with her!"

    That like made me cry lol i think ur talented so keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by LadyLk

    Your poems are beautiful.. Please keep writting. I'd love to read more

  • 15 years ago

    by divine divinity

    Beautiful poem, raw, intense and very expressive emotions. Really felt the pain, the love, the heart break, it all came through in your words effortlessly. :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    This truly touched my heart. I know exactly how you feel. Very well written, 5/5. Em