by Prince Jared Aug 21, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Raindrops run down my window |
Oh btw, regarding you earlier comment, right after mine... |
by Sora
Wow. this was beautiful. yet sad at the same time. it was mesmerizing to me. i love how you compared raindrops and teardrops. extremely creative. you can attract the reader's attention so quickly it's amazing. and you know how to make your words come to life, i could picture it all. job well done. keep writing! 5/5. |
by Prince Jared
Yes, it is one of those poems that anyone with even simple imagination could picture. Thanks for commenting. :) |
by AlongfortheRide
Very nice, sad, I could picture it all... |
by Prince Jared
I'm sorry I never sent it in; I just stopped believing.....:( |