Love in Vain

I think you mean too many, and to many. You are an amazing, talented poet. I could read your words continuously. It merits 5/5, Keep on writing, kel.

It is when we stop looking that love seems to find us.

Aww that was so cute baby made me smile :D 5/5 from mee for sure

Butterflies confuse the naive mind,
With open eyes how can we be so blind.

^ these 2 lines were really powerful, i felt, because so many people, including you and i, thought we were in love because of what we thought we felt. its so funny looking back on it now, and thinkign how crazy we were to actually believe we were in love. if that was love, i dont even know what we have would be considered. :)

Discovered my heart, not within my chest,
It belonged to her and I'm truly blessed,
Got what I wanted without looking at all,
My angel answered and I didn't even call.

^this was my favorite stanza :) it was so cute, and so true, because i feel this for you too. i have your heart and you have mine, weve had them all along, it just took us some time to realize it.

"My angel answered and I didn't even call."

this line pretty much sums up how we met, in a way at least. its crazy how quickly and suddenly you can meet the love of your life, but it goes to show that the best things in life are not expected, and those things are amazing to have, and also your extremely lucky if you get to experience the love that we do :)

everyone can relate to lying to their heart and pretending like everything is so much better than it actually is, but in our case, it is really amazing :) i love you so much :)

Wow that is really cute and sweet i llike this part best

Discovered my heart, not within my chest,
It belonged to her and I'm truly blessed,
Got what I wanted without looking at all,
My angel answered and I didn't even call.

kiwi

Let love come to me, thats when it all began.
^^ You missed the comma here..XDD

A very sweet and lovely piece that would melt anyone’s heart…I liked the positive approach towards love on this poem. Everything seemed perfect. Written flawlessly and left me in a good mood. Good Job..