Rain Moment Right Moment

by daniel   Aug 21, 2008


She likes me today
Were just friends tommrow
We say these things
When we see eachother everthing will change
Her eyes speak to me
I remember everything we went through
It feels so right when she is laying by my side

Her past tries to bring her down
My past tries to turn me upside down
When we both collide
No ones around
Such a beautiful site
Collapses without sound

I try to find the one who is diffrent
The one who changes everything with a smile
There she was the whole time
My bestfriend was there for me
Through the worst of times

It's time now
No one else moves me like her
Its hard to do the things I say
To wait and move on
Those words dont speak my heart
The rythem dances in my head
There she is
I cant help it

We hug
We smoke
We talk
We look into each others eyes
Butterflies stir
Rain falls
There it is
The moment is right
The feeling is fine
Akward silence

You can guess what comes next

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  • 16 years ago

    by Candy

    This's cute [=

  • 16 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    AMAZING!

  • 16 years ago

    by Fantasy

    This is actually pretty good =D,, it keeps you wanting more. A suspense love story, keep it up.

    Comment my writing as well, please.
    Dollfacee.