The last line is extremely powerful and perfect ending! :]

I love this, but remember... you don't need to change for ANYONE, but rather find someone who accepts you for who You are, not what they WANT you to become :]

Aww thank u but with him, god save my soul and my mind, i'm always trying to do what's best

This poem ended so powerfully and it was great. I loved the range of emotion you put into it and again, the ending just ended it perfectly. Great work, keep writing!

Thanks

I love this, i'm goin to fav this