What I'm Really Feeling, My Eyes Won't Let Me Hide.

by Courageous Dreamer   Aug 21, 2008


After such a surprising heartbreak that shocked my soul-
my eyes are no longer capable of hiding true emotions.
Heart declined, ripped to shreds and thrown in a pile-
nothing will hide the tears that will soon be shed-
by these very eyes that have experienced so much.

What I'm really feeling, my eyes won't let me hide,
for they hold so much within them that needs to show.
Tears will stream down my face in a matter of seconds-
releasing all the emotions that have been held back til now.
These tears will whisper the words of regret and lost love.

Hope will seep through these eyes in days to come-
it may not be for a while, but it will find its way.
Resulting in a new love life that will blossom beautifully-
mending my heart, putting back together the lost pieces.
Eyes will no longer hide sad emotions, they will shine.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    Again a piece which seems more like a story.
    To make a good poem I'd suggest to move to a 4 lines stanzas or trying to write with rhymes.

    Again a subject which can be easily related. Loved the word choice, but the flow was broken in some of the places again.

    Overall nice poem 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by DarkCrystalbtrfy

    Hey I liked it a lot it had a very nice rythm in it

  • 16 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Its remarkable how tears can release so much emotion. That was a cool topic to write about. Interesting read. Nice job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Aisha

    I like the stages in the poem the intensity of it is in the middle stanza and thats my favourite part. it seems to me as though the ending was rushed though so i wasn't too hyped over the ending compard to the other 2 stanzas. overall i liked it well done!

    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem flows very well in a free verse style conveying the dark emotion of lost love that most have experienced I do love a sad poem that seeks a spiritual remedy as this one ends on a brighter hopefull tone

    I love it

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