"What I'm really feeling, my eyes won't let me hide,"
That line is easy to relate to, I'm sure a lot of readers would love it.

"Tears will fall like waterfalls down my cheeks in seconds-"
Very cliche. Tears like waterfalls? Maybe try for something a little less used next time.

"Eyes will no longer hide sad emotions, they will shine. "
I love this. It's such a beautiful line and it works with the rest of the poem so beautifully.

I'm not really into the whole self pitty poems but this one was good. It had great form, though the flow was a bit off (due to the long lines). The imagery was average. I'd say work on your originality a bit more in the future. You have the form and you can do wonderful things if you break the cliche and find your own style.

Still a decent poem, 5/5

jess ~

Beautifully written.

I am sure many people can relate to this poem, the idea that one day, though their life has been graced by much heartbreak, they can let all of that go and find new love again.

One thing I truly admire about this poem is that there is no rhyming, and you pull that style off wonderfully. I admire it, because I myself have much trouble trying to write non-rhyming poems.
Excellent descriptions of what is hidden and then released from within.
5/5

This poem flows very well in a free verse style conveying the dark emotion of lost love that most have experienced I do love a sad poem that seeks a spiritual remedy as this one ends on a brighter hopefull tone

I love it

I like the stages in the poem the intensity of it is in the middle stanza and thats my favourite part. it seems to me as though the ending was rushed though so i wasn't too hyped over the ending compard to the other 2 stanzas. overall i liked it well done!

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Its remarkable how tears can release so much emotion. That was a cool topic to write about. Interesting read. Nice job.

Hey I liked it a lot it had a very nice rythm in it

Again a piece which seems more like a story.
To make a good poem I'd suggest to move to a 4 lines stanzas or trying to write with rhymes.

Again a subject which can be easily related. Loved the word choice, but the flow was broken in some of the places again.

Overall nice poem 4/5