Comments : When im with you

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    Aww very sweet and absolutely true. True love accepts a person, over looks all the imperfections and makes a perfect angel out of that person, you explained that very beautifuly and very well.

    you're so good at this, keep it up !

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Marie

    Lovely poem.. your choice of words and how the poem flows are great! Maybe you should explain things more or give more detail. You know, Create imagery. Besides that everything is lovely!