A father of addiction or alcoholism? A sad read, but children of all ages still want and love of the father or mother that gave them birth.
Very good job.

Children seem to love their parents regardless of how they hurt them, and parents sometimes have no idea the psychological scars they are leaving on their children. An excellent piece,with metaphors fitting the subject!

I love this poem, it's crazy how children can see the worst in their parents, yet still love them alot.

This is very sad!!! You have written a very emotional piece and I can def. relate to that!!!

5/5

As said above you show the incredible relationship between child and parent and how truly unbreakable it is. You turn such looked down upon topics into something amazing. Very nice.