by D Douthit Aug 21, 2008
category :
Friendship, family /
family
When I'm talking about |
by debbie
Fantastic poem, really sweet |
by Ashley
Wow, great poem! It did'nt have to rhyme, but it was great! People always think a poem MUST rhyme to be good, but this one was amazing. One thing I would change though, is the flow. It's a little choppy. But still, its great, and I love the story behind it. Happy writing! |