by Andrew
Ok, time to get my critics hat on ;) |
by Kurt
I always appreciate a poem that deviates from the norm. To read your poem that barely mentions a cliche topic is refreshing. The rhythm was simple and easy enough to follow. There were no particular moments where the rhythm or flow caused me to stop or falter in reading. In fact, the only reasons I paused was to contemplate and briefly recreate the images outlined and described in your poem. This poem hit closer to home than I had thought it would. I see how even I have a tendency to miss opportunities to experience life and this is a reminder of how rewarding a risky decision can be. Definately a splendid write. 5/5. |
Very Creative; love it! |