Comments : Maybe Someday

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Very sad piece you have penned.

    This shall pass
    in time
    all will heal
    maybe
    someday

    Time does heal some things but not all.....it just gets a little easier to cope. Or to hide the pain frrom others.

    No more tears
    I hope
    to blind my days
    as time
    withers

    To many tears do blind us. Time spent crying lets time we could have used for other things slip right by.

    Streams of laughter
    I want
    as skin droops down
    give me
    warmth

    It would be wonderful if we could give the warmth of smiles to everyone including ourselve. I likes this stanza.
    Nice job!
    Take Care Cindy