Song : Dedicated to him.

by Fantasy   Aug 22, 2008


Ok, well this is actually a song, so its quite long, haha, that rhymed =P, but please read/comment/rate. Thanks!!

You slam the door,
But you don't know how i feel without you,
I wish the screaming fights would end,
So i wouldn't have to pretend, ohh..

Chorus
Oh, the nights, I lie awake,
Thinking of the things we say,
And it kills me to know,
That it will never be okay.

I turn around to face,
But instead I run away,
My heart is aching,
And I can't hide it another day, hey...

Bridge
My love for you,
Is losing touch,
My world is spinning,
And I'm falling,
How can I,
Make it go away? Yeahh..

If I could touch you again,
I would be in so much pain, yeah,
But you, your vein,
And I cant take one more day.

Chorus
Oh, the night, I lie awake,
Thinking of the things we say,
And it kills me to know,
That it will never be okay..

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    Um, its different . I like the idea .. But I just can't really get it to flow the way it should .. 4/5?

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    I can relate to the pain. I imagined it as more of a poem. but i liked it either way.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I think it might sound cool as a song.....Avril Lavigne sounding in my mind. I don't know if I care for all the Yeahs and heys and ohs though.....

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    ^your (possessive form) vein^ Is a vessel in your body. I think you mean to say you're (you are) vain.......

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Wow i wish i can heard the melody coz the words are very well expressive, this is very dedicated not only to some u've been dedicated to also to everyone who attempt to read this poet,, very great 5/5 keep on wriiting all what u feel