by SashaMirage Aug 22, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
One day you're happy and the next day you're sad |
by Faithless
Wow this is a very sad poem...the metaphors tt you used depicts the picture so clearly |
by SashaMirage
Thanks for the great comment Mostafa! |
by mostafa
Damn you're good :D |
by SashaMirage
Thanks for the advice Britt, I took it. I see that my poem does flow much better now! |
by Brittany C
I liked it, you used good wording and it is a nice length. I think that if you were to put spaces in it then it would flow better but other then that it's great. 5/5 |