You'rer a Tidal Wave of Emotions

by SashaMirage   Aug 22, 2008


One day you're happy and the next day you're sad
You say you are good but at the same time so bad
Always crying and laughing at the same time
Choosing both heads and tails when I toss a dime

You love me, you hate me; Imprisoned, yet free
A wave of emotions coming in from the sea
A roller coaster I have no inclination to ride
Give me some credit; I am hurt but with pride

Leaving my heart here, while you do what you do
I've had enough now, just leave we're through!
You're a train that jumped off its track
I promise a farewell, never to look back

A speeding tornado; I'm unable to match you
Not taking a breath; not wanting me to catch you
I'm the particles of dust you leave behind,
As so many thoughts fill up your mind

Not ever knowing where you wish to be
Just running at a fast pace, hoping to flee
But the only thing you're leaving behind is me;
The chains you are breaking to escape and be free

Why bother asking so many questions
When answers don't seem to come easily?
I don't have to look deep in your eyes
To see all the usless time wasted, I see

No longer surfing; now I'm finally brave
You're an emotional, destructive tidal wave

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  • 16 years ago

    by Faithless

    Wow this is a very sad poem...the metaphors tt you used depicts the picture so clearly
    of your relationship.The flow was very smooth indeed and i like the ending

    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Thanks for the great comment Mostafa!

  • 16 years ago

    by mostafa

    Damn you're good :D
    this one totally blew my mind !!

    Your a roller coaster that I don't want to ride.
    Give me some credit, I have pride.

    this part drew a wide smile across my face :)

    "I'm the particles of dust you leave behind."

    one line worth a whole poem !!
    it's so amazing that this is the 5th time i rewrite my comment about it. i'm really speechless it just took my breath away .what a picture you painted with that one !

    I shall no longer surf, now I'm finally brave.
    Your an emotional destructive Tidal Wave.

    strong ending to a powerfull poem
    nice choice of title :)

  • 16 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Thanks for the advice Britt, I took it. I see that my poem does flow much better now!

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I liked it, you used good wording and it is a nice length. I think that if you were to put spaces in it then it would flow better but other then that it's great. 5/5