To End All Wars

by Vox   Aug 22, 2008


Today brings the dawn of a brand new world,
Where kindness, hope, and love unfurl.
Drop your weapons and open your arms,
We will create a home without harm.

What will it take to get you to say,
That how we are living isnt the way.
So take my hand, stand up and say,
It's just about time we've ended the fray.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Needer of You

    Wow! It has a strong message, the word choice is perfect, and the rhyme flows naturally. Short and sweet and very true.

    Keep on writing!:D

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    Good poem strong message and amazing aproch on the subject
    I felt that your poem was a little off in some places but it might be the fact that I'm having an off day.

    thanks for the read
    ~Sam~

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Although I love the idea and I think most of us wish it could be this way, the reality is it'll never be. I thought to poem was written well, but could have been a little bit better. In the second stanza you used "Say" twice and it takes a lot out of the poem for me. I gave it a 4/5 good job all in all GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by StarGirl

    Were you influenced by the song Imagine when you wrote this? Because it made me think of that. It's a short poem but it's message is consise and to the point. Great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mishka

    I LOVE THIS. It reminds me of my latest poem... about how this world is changing... and it should notbe. "how we are living isnt the way." best desribes it.

    i really liked this.
    short and gets the message across.

    5/5
    Val

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