I just love this poem and the rhyming scheme was just perfect, I love the way you have the tendency of keeping poems short, making it hav deliberate emphasis and relation.Well Done!5/5 You have my vote.

Chinwe

Short and very effective. Great write. Poems like these are the best in my opinion. Great flow, good word usage, and the concept is heart-warming. I really loved this poem. 5/5

I LOVE THIS. It reminds me of my latest poem... about how this world is changing... and it should notbe. "how we are living isnt the way." best desribes it.

i really liked this.
short and gets the message across.

5/5
Val

Were you influenced by the song Imagine when you wrote this? Because it made me think of that. It's a short poem but it's message is consise and to the point. Great job!

Although I love the idea and I think most of us wish it could be this way, the reality is it'll never be. I thought to poem was written well, but could have been a little bit better. In the second stanza you used "Say" twice and it takes a lot out of the poem for me. I gave it a 4/5 good job all in all GG23

Good poem strong message and amazing aproch on the subject
I felt that your poem was a little off in some places but it might be the fact that I'm having an off day.

thanks for the read
~Sam~

Wow! It has a strong message, the word choice is perfect, and the rhyme flows naturally. Short and sweet and very true.

Keep on writing!:D