Broken Shards Of A Lost Soul

By far your best poem 5/5 worthy compared to anybodys. But these are the poems that draw my attention but I still think its 5/5 worthy The ryhmes and vocabulary put together is something rare to find 5/5 The flow ALMOST perfect but flow is something thats hard to find 4/5 and the Emotinal impact6/5 ====5/5

The poem itself is really good, work on the flow a bit and you could make the good incredible

Wow...you are definitely sooooooo magaling!! ever!!! hahaha..idol talaga kita bridget.. ^o^ kahit na hindi ko masyadong naiintindihan ang mga poems mo(kelangan ko pa kasi tingnan sa dictionary e!),i really appreciate your skills in writing.. the best!! no one compares.. sobra...

This poem was beautifully written. I could really feel every word. My fav. part was-

"Sick from those dulcet words of lies
From people's serpentine mouths
Slowly making the poor soul shatter,
Leaving those shards scattered."

For lack of a better word it was brilliant. You have talent indeed. You got my vote 5/5 definately.

I'd go as far as to say this is mature beyond your years. I would also drop the "be" from the last line. Otherwise this is admirable!