Comments : Broken Shards Of A Lost Soul

  • 16 years ago

    by death viper strikes again

    Very interesting poem, it was extremely well written. you are a brilliant poet but you put yourself down too much. well done and keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Breely

    I love your poem. Is very well written like Jarek commented too.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    I'd go as far as to say this is mature beyond your years. I would also drop the "be" from the last line. Otherwise this is admirable!

  • 16 years ago

    by Brad Quammen

    This poem was beautifully written. I could really feel every word. My fav. part was-

    "Sick from those dulcet words of lies
    From people's serpentine mouths
    Slowly making the poor soul shatter,
    Leaving those shards scattered."

    For lack of a better word it was brilliant. You have talent indeed. You got my vote 5/5 definately.

  • 16 years ago

    by Eminent Bard

    Wow...you are definitely sooooooo magaling!! ever!!! hahaha..idol talaga kita bridget.. ^o^ kahit na hindi ko masyadong naiintindihan ang mga poems mo(kelangan ko pa kasi tingnan sa dictionary e!),i really appreciate your skills in writing.. the best!! no one compares.. sobra...

  • 16 years ago

    by dante

    The poem itself is really good, work on the flow a bit and you could make the good incredible

  • 16 years ago

    by Steven Topaz

    By far your best poem 5/5 worthy compared to anybodys. But these are the poems that draw my attention but I still think its 5/5 worthy The ryhmes and vocabulary put together is something rare to find 5/5 The flow ALMOST perfect but flow is something thats hard to find 4/5 and the Emotinal impact6/5 ====5/5