by Hollymariee Aug 22, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Tell me lies and call me names |
by ketaki
Good well written a story of lost love. |
by Lady Nik
I liked this. It reminds me of some of my older work. Very simple, but the emotions are still powerful and clear. I liked the easy flow of things, makes it easier to read and relate to. You have a gift for reading sweet poems like this. Keep it up. Shanik |
I love this one i really know you how you feel ive been through that more than once you are letting out so much in this poem great, no excellent job 5/5!!!! |
Amazing` powerful ending. |
by Kimberley
Everything was amazing but maybe its just me but the second last line sorta sounded off. i dont really know what you should wrte but it seemed.... wrong somehow. anywho amazing poem. 4.8/5 ~KM~ |