Grace an abode of manifold laughter

I think that that was the best line.
I feel that the poem could have been longer, and had more metaphors or personification, but you have a good general idea.

I though the poem was beautiful all the way through,the imagery was really outstanding,It held a serene mood that was superb,Only one thought hit me as far as help would go ,the ending line repeated the word "peace"I wondered if maybe the last word could have been "ease"just a thought but this poem was excellent.