Comments : Spiral Bound:

  • 16 years ago

    by Deana

    Words hold more power than people often realize,Its good that you keep a record of life.An excellent write.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Steve
    What a wonderful piece you have penned.

    My pen transcribes onto
    my spiral bound and weaves
    the stories of life which
    I hope to share.

    for years I have kept journals. hopefully someday my grandchildren will learn things from me when I'm no longer around to share my wisdom with them.

    The lines may not be long,
    the words need not be colorful,
    but be concise for you to see
    exactly what I feel, smell and hear.

    Being disabled..I have many friends who have taken me on so many journies through their words. I can actually imagine being there and seeing what they see.

    For words are able to show
    emotions and feelings deep from
    within the writer's mind and soul.

    Words are so powerful and can do so many things. Bring out so many emotions.
    Excellent job!
    Love and hugs
    Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    Such a nice write, it completely reminds me of myself. I always have my little spiral book with me or beside me, in case the need or urge to write arises.

    The lines may not be long,
    the words need not be colorful,
    but be concise for you to see
    exactly what I feel, smell and hear.

    I am glad I came across this piece, you have penned a wonderful poem, good job!