Compared (rap)

by Dustin S   Aug 22, 2008


Got a rep to keep, and fans to write for,
So keep away if you hate, i just might roar.
Cause my heart soars with every line I write,
And I try to bring more to the game every night.
When I stop to think, me and him are two in one.
We both write, sometimes to say "you are done"
He, already is in power, havin fun in his hour,
Me, I'm comin up the tower, very soon to devour.
Both with skill to kill, as we spray out our mind,
Growth in progress! We're a duo of the same kind!
Two of the same, just two ones with a different name.
Both writin the game, gettin bigger with fame.
No wigger, but mess wit me feel my wrath!
Know that I dont care! Im real on this path!
Now Em, I respect him cause he's the king.
To them, he perfect at it but I wing.
Write what comes out, and be about anything.
Fights and love and family, wrote round my ring.
Holdin up money sayin ur the next sign,
Whos better? Marshall Mathers' or mine?

Rollin on with my career,
Rappin and improvin with anything near.
Im reading, it says, "Eminem's flared!"
But honestly whos better when we're compared?

Its my dream to have us battle.
To see who hold more cattle.
RAP GOD is what I read on a comment,
But you know its to bad when your livin on rent.
G is the name I am tryin to get.
Me is who I want the king to spit.
Give it up, give me the title.
Make me be eminem's idle.
After I leave, I am gonna be a legend.
No matter how much time I have to spend.
Never will pretend to be the only
White rapper bein a gangsta's homie.
Mind out of the game, yet your still rappin,
I wanna be better then you to see what'll happen.
Over 200 song you have wrote, and spoke
As a rapping legend the record is broke.
Well I got seven years to train,
Lets hope thats long enough to gain
The skill needed to bring the pain.
Till then my skill I must retain.

Rollin on with my career,
Rappin and improvin with anything near.
Im reading, it says, "Eminem's flared!"
But honestly whos better when we're compared?

*Im havin a bad day. Cant think straight*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I think you did a pretty good job, I'm not much of a fan of rapping so I can't tell you if you're really good or if you're terrible.. I guess only other rappers would be able to tell you an honest opinion on that. The rhymign was really good and the flow was really good, the only thing I would have wished for was a stronger ending, it didn't really wow me all that much. Otherwise, I think you did a fabulous job. 5/5 (: