This is not funny

by jasmine cherry   Aug 22, 2008


It's all around me
circling
i can't get out
i can't
i can't
please
i can't swim
pull me
out
pull me out
i said
I'm trying
help me she's drowning
these are the last words she hears
Prenticed dead
three days later

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow its really good and really sad. great job!!

    10/10

  • 16 years ago

    by LovedThenLost

    Thats really good

  • 16 years ago

    by liiz

    Very very deep. seems like ur not scared to write the hard stuff

  • 16 years ago

    by MEMI

    Wow thats deep

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelsie Danielle

    Good really i like it

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