So strong... so sad... and deep!

best poem i've read in a while!!!!

one thing though,

spelling error:

I tried to flap my wings to free myself from where I was bound.
But to my surprise it had failed. All my hopes had drowned.
My wings were disappearing right be for my very own eyes.
I was not an angel anymore, I was victim to his surprises.

the word " before" you spelled it "be for"

5/5!

Awsome poem. detailed, intresting. and a definate 5.
**harlea

Wow this was an amazing write! very deep and creative. i love what you wrote about it was great. i love reading poems in story form and this told a mesmerizing story. i loved it all! job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.