Deana,

What a beautiful poem..I have never heared about this poetry form, but it looks beautiful.
Thank you so much for the comment and yes, I am doing fine:) I hope you are fine too.

Hugs,

Ingrid

Deana,

Lovely, the flow is tight and the choice of words is great.

Steve

Deana what a awesome job you did on this Pantoum. The imagery and word choices are great. The emotions are felt in everyword.
Great job!
Love Cindy

That was short.. sweet.. wonderful and touching

Beautifully penned. I would suggest adding (Pantoum) after the title and including a description of the form at the end so those who aren't familiar with it and want to have a go at it, know the rules. Then they can also appreciate how challenging it can be to write a form, having it make sense while adhering to the guidelines.

Good imagery and flow, the rhyming is not forced. The rhythm sounds great when read aloud!!! You did an excellent job!

Beautiful poem and an awesome job on this difficult form! I really love the snow on the rose....wonderful word choices!

Beautifully written.

This is an absolutely beautiful poem and you wrote this wonderfully. Congrats on the win, well deserved. Keep writing, always and forever...

You must be good at english...or was good at english.
Nice flow and rythum, word choice and imagery. I liked it.
I took this poem to have more than one meaning and I think that is one hard thing to you. I dont know if you tryed it, but I liked it. :) haha*

Very nice. Each time I read it, I get a different meaning to it.

Nice...keep up the good work (^_^)

Nice...keep up the good work (^_^)

Deana,

I reread this poem and I still think it is so beautifully written!
I love the soft, romantic feelings it evokes:)

Hugs,

Ingrid