Thunderstorm

by stillmomsgirl   Aug 23, 2008


A flash of lightning
A cowering child
Tonight the weather's
not so mild

A frightened dog
Under the bed
Hoping not to
bump his head

Harsh winds
Fallen trees
The storm suddenly
starts to ease

Mother holds
The child so tight
Hoping they will
sleep tonight

Child asleep
in mother's arms
Tonight they are not
in any harm

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    I'm with Ashley. I didn't see the humour in it, but it did fit the "for kids" sub-heading superbly. A very delicate but powerful piece, I thoroughly enjoyed.

  • 16 years ago

    by BrOkeN HeArt Can kill

    Poem* lolz ;p

  • 16 years ago

    by BrOkeN HeArt Can kill

    That's nott funny. buh gud peom

  • 16 years ago

    by TheBarefootedCowgirl

    Very clear picture you depicted!!! awesome job!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Its really nice... the rymes ... the way you put the words as well... and in the end everyone was sasfe...

    i atcually had an image in my mind, while i was reaeding!!

    good job

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